All Comments on 'Danny Learns, and Passes It On'

I liked this story, Your build up with Natalie was great, and the double perspective was great but with Sandra I thought it was so-so because it didn't seem accurate and you didn't have that perspective switch. I thought the accuracy between Sandra and Danny was because of the way he handled Sandra after the break up and getting back together. I'm not sure if the perspective switch between Natalie and Danny was left out of Sandra and Danny was intentional because this is meant for more chapters but if it is I will read the next one. 3.5 out 5, Gave you 4 though :) keep writing

your writing, like your characters love making, will get better with practice and hopefully will overcome an honest confession (yes, a sequel). As a quadriplegic with no sensation below my chest, i found that delivering multiple o's to a loving partner was so empowering that i didn't need my own climax to be the best sex i had ever had.. i was paralyzed at 28... unfortunately my emotional and imagery climax was not enough and i lost my lover... resulting in the lonely quad

I like sex ed stories like this. Unfortunately most are lacking what this one has:. Using the newfound skills with a peer. This could even be carried a step further with him reporting back to Natalie the wondrous results of her compassionate and skillful instruction.

An easy 5 stars.

Paul in Oklahoma