Dark Angel Ch. 07

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Ashriel grinned when he heard the guards running to their downed friend.

"He won't be walking for a while," Natanael snorted.

They walked through metal double doors and stopped at the edge of a platform. Silver, shell-shaped transports floated to them.

"You are to remain seated within these personal transports at all times. If you step out of the transport while the green boarder is lit, you will die instantly. The transports are for your safety."

Ashriel glared down at the guard who was speaking.

"We need no protection. We are holy warriors."

The guard gulped, and Ashriel imagined his eyes wide behind the black goggles he wore. His heavy breathing was audible through the respirator as Ashriel towered over him.

"Sorry, sir. It's just protocol. You must never let your feet touch the glass floor. Only stand on the metal platforms and only if your transport deactivates its force fields. If we were attacked, the force field would keep you safe within your transport."

Ashriel wanted to argue, knowing the whole safety issue was a lie. They only wanted to control their guests and monitor where they went, but that was unimportant now.

Grudgingly, he sat within one of the transports and watched the others do the same.

"This is like being in Disney," Eriel laughed, his light mood really grating on Ashriel's nerves.

As if reading his mind, Natanael looked at Ashriel and said, "That's his coping mechanism, Ash. Please don't kill him."

Eriel sat and looked from Ashriel to Natanael. "What?"

"Erie, please. Just zip it already," Natanael hissed.

Eriel snorted. "Whatever, sheesh."

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SweetRapunzelSweetRapunzelover 10 years ago
Oh wow!! ^_______________^

Well done with this new world and its population. I have no comments or complain or so except that this chapter have had my mind and imagination turning 360 degree many times. Huh you may say? Le' me clue you in about that...

1the big girl panties have me thinking of sexy underwares then make a turn of 360 degree to thinking of the commercial about diaper. Ya know the one that the kids over 1 years old are using for potty training? I think it air in the US or is it Europe? Can't remember. It those kind of diaper that kids can pull down when go to the toilet and pull up when the kids is done...I think the jingle goes some thing like I'm a big kid now...using big kids panties...?

2 nd the tentacles is having me think of Japanese hentai...the tentacles that rape girls...not my cup of tea that kind of hentai. Well, this are just some example of the things that had my imagination turning 360 degree on most of the pages here. Kinda have me chuckel to my self a few time though LOL ^_______________^

LevanaHyllLevanaHyllalmost 11 years agoAuthor

I uploaded chapter 8 like a week ago. It's out of my hands when Lit posts it. So far it's still pending. Sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
please please please!

Please hurry with the rest of the story! I'm addicted! I gotta see what happens!

katgoddess1katgoddess1almost 11 years ago

What a strange situation they are in. Who is their hero with the unusual wings? Could it possibly be Anniel's son Gareth, with one white wing and one cybernetic wing? That would be awesome.

JadephireJadephirealmost 11 years ago
great long chapter

Great chapter this is turning intoone of my favorite books in this series.

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