Dark Angel Ch. 12

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"Tell me what you're looking for and I'll help you find it," Ashriel said calmly.

"Um," Natanael replied raking fingers through his messy purple Mohawk. "Maybe I left it in the Starcruiser."

Ashriel raised one brow, pursing his lips. "Maybe you did, Naty."

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LevanaHyllLevanaHyllalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Crystal vid

Ashriel played the vid in their "playroom". Remember? It was Lucien with Anniel when she was pregnant from Garethiel (baby Gareth/Cyneolle). I wrote a Short story about it, Lucien's point of view.

KyriaeKyriaealmost 10 years ago
I know it is late to commen but

u never. said what was in the crystal vid

LevanaHyllLevanaHyllover 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you.

I love Ashriel, his strength and honor and his humility. He is certainly as beautiful inside as he is outside. I'm very glad you commented about the parents because while I was editing this story for publication, my computer crashed and the last four chapters of this book were lost. I had a PDF copy which I had to print in order to restore the ending, but I find myself making some major overhauls and plot changes and your comment has just inspired my to write in such a scene. Thank you!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
My favourite character so far

I can't wait to laugh out loud at Ashriel and Garethiel's parents' change of heart when they eventually find out their new granddaughter is full seraphian- ah, the messed up vanity over blood.

But my main point is that Ashriel is my absolute favourite character in this series! All the reaper and seraphian males and their male descendants are enigmatic but Ash just does it for me- even though Dava and Lucien are my type! This installment may have been "vanilla" compared to the others in the story, but I always found that I could relate to Ashriel strongly. And now I have a thing for the Reapers as described in this series- haha.

I must say that I can't wait for the installment centred on Seth. Since everybody gets knocked up, I wonder if we'll be reading of black and white flying tiger cubs?

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 10 years ago
Simply marvelous!

Well, it looks like Garethiel grew up a little! Too bad his parents are jerks. What the heck was going on with Rayne asking to save Boy-Rayne? I need to understand her story too!

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