All Comments on 'Dark Assassin Ch. 04'

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TJSkywindTJSkywindabout 9 years ago
Enjoying the tale as it progresses

Two usage errors stood out.

Baron is a rank of hereditary nobility. Barren, which is what I believe you wanted, means empty, lifeless, or infertile.

Accolade is a form of praise. An acolyte is a novice or apprentice who studies magic or religion.

Yes, Wyatt is quite the urbane, despot. A likeable monster. Looking forward to the next installment.

osamelyhrebicekosamelyhrebicekabout 9 years ago

Thanks for another great chapter. I like you chose even for bad character some kindness. I expected worse manners from king murderer. I like he is not completely evil, just understandably selfish. I like maid part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Your grace

A king --> your majesty

A duke --> your grace

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
very nice...So...

......chapter five coming?

John

bitbucket1bitbucket1over 7 years ago
Great strait, hope you continue sometime

Thanks

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