All Comments on 'Dark Coercion#1: Grade A Pussy'

I thought the storyline here was given a great deal of thought in the planning stage, making the whole story that much more plausible. Clever/skilful writing has made me add this to my favourites. Well done.

... detail and wonderfully thought out.

Oooh, this is my favorite story on Literotica so far! Mmm, I'll keep coming back to this one, thinking about that one professor..

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God damn....made my panties wet

You may be an "intelligent man," but you're not the best writer.

well laid out plot... it was a totally new novel idea of a non consent story... liked the little romantic touch at the end... overall, a winner... kudos...

gary

I was very aroused while reading this bit... I'm a little ashamed to say. As I am a very young woman myself, I just recently turned eighteen, putting myself in her place seems to really turn me on...

Though I would never actually want to be raped by a man who I don't know and really just not want it, but with it being out of agreement sounds terribly sexy to me. Especially with an older man. Even though I would never do this personally...it's still highly arousing.

Very erotic and a real turn on.

This story would improve greatly if it was edited.

Some paragraphs were a little long.

Some of the punctuation was missing with thoughts and dialog in the same sentence.

Keep writing.

This story was devilishly good. I loved the manipulation, it is positively glorious.

Delicious story. I keep returning to it.