All Comments on 'Dark Desire'

You can't leave it there!! That was awesome!

I do hope you continue with this story. it is quite enticing. Just a small note: be careful with consistency - at the party she was tugging on a navy blazer and in the car you talk about her wearing a black suit coat. I'll be waiting for the next installment. :)

Ooh cannot wait for more.

I really hope you continue with this one - it starts really nice, please write more on this one!

Don't. Stop. Now!

you cannot leave this like this it would be hurtful to the extreme more please

I sincerely hope this continues!