All Comments on 'Dark Desires Ch. 08'

literature ....on a par

with many experimental writers

such as Tom Wolfe

and Truman Capote and the whole

faction movement of the early 60's

keep up this fabulous series

Jack Kerouac would be proud ...

literature ....on a par

with many experimental writers

such as Tom Wolfe

and Truman Capote and the whole

faction movement of the early 60's

keep up this fabulous series

Jack Kerouac would be proud ...

Not too sure why people dislike this story line, I could understand if they were commenting on your grammer and spelling etc, but if you do not like the content then why read it. Still free speech is a wonder to behold, anyway I like your stories and hope that you will keep on posting.

You keep raising the arousal level. Mark must resign himself to his true destiny, there is no other way.

Now Mark has to stand up and make her choose. Or knock 'em off. THE HUSBAND SHOULD ALWAYS GET THE LAST WORD.

"Or knock 'em off. THE HUSBAND SHOULD ALWAYS GET THE LAST WORD"

great story and i would love to see something like that..hope you continue the story.

To prove that blacks are inferior to whites. Black men want to fuck white women. They do this attack the Man. Nobody wants black women.

The white sluts need a good neck stretch just like there lovers.

I've read "Dark Desires" over and over. I couldn't help seeing myself as Amy. I lived an interracially/cuckolding lifestyle for a short period of time. It was wonderfully exhilarating in the beginning but, the stress of a woman serving the contentious demands of a husband and a lover at the same time becomes emotionally straining. The husband and the lover must be in total agreement for a woman to receive the sexually, loving satisfaction that she expected in the arrangement. Although it ended badly, I have no regrets! I wish I could express it as well as the author wantswhitewomen.

I read, it seems to me like the message is that only a black man can please a woman, this is bull shit at its best. I can not belive that a woman would throw away her children and her family just to have a black dick, if you belive this kind of crap, then you will fall for anything,

Lacks credibility...starts out with promise and it just goes on and on like a bad dream. Honestly, I tried to like it and it not only lacks plausibility, but I wasted my time reading it. I know...then why did I read it? Truthfully, I thought it would get better, it didn't. Take an aspirin and call me in the morning.

Not bad, but for final emphasis, and final humiliation to Mark. Daniel should have insisted that, when Mark held his cock, Mark should have been told to suck it.

Some would not like that part of a story, but true humiliation has to be him sucking Daniels cock.

He has rational thoughts of a somewhat normal man with self esteem...sometimes, and then lapses into the excitement thing...okay.

You drove this whole damn story to where he wakes up and realizes he's been had, she is gone and he needs to do something. Telling us he is going to put his foot down and rearrange their schedule - give me a break.

You wrote his character to have some manhood, you should have left it with...well, I have an appointment with an attorney Monday or...well everything is packed, the kids are in the car and we should be 5 states away by Sunday night...I hope she doesn't end up working the streets but - he knows she will eventually.

Okay, it's an interracial story BUT YOU wrote the little signals in and they weren't just his getting more agreeable - there was reluctance to the point of thinking about calling an end to it SO...you should have ended it differently. She's a slut, a whore and she is going to willingly be prostituted!

I enjoyed the story line. when are you gonna finish it. you left the door open to several posiblities and haven't complete it one way or the other. she either continues down this path to complete destruction of her happy home or she gives it up and goes back to her husband. which one is it and finish what you started.

fuck you and all you fuckin ass holes

Puke.

if you like cuck stories it's one of the best on here. And I gave it a 5 because of Anony being a asswipe and giving it a 1. we offset.

bull shit the wife turned out to be the biggest peice of sucum inthe world.the husban is the balls les asshole out there,he should toled the wife how it was to be done and the b lack where to go if he not like his rules there no way he should let her go by her self,he should make sure he is in controlnot the fucken black ,and like to say all the time you fucken blacks blacks are full of shit ,the size of your dicks are no bigger then white men asshole fuck you and go stick your pricks up your own assholesfuck sticks dont pay to much what the movies say it is all bull shit dont fore get to sitck a biggg white dildo up your own asshole faget scum bag .

This nigger was killed in a drive by while standing on a street corner, too bad, so sad!

Will the next chapter have Mark tied down and raped by big black cock? Get him broke in so he can start servicing the brothers, and if he doesn't cave in, they can always kill him, then use the insurance money.

The only thing she hasn't experienced with her Black Lover... when she's pregnant with her lover's baby, or maybe one of the men in the GB/DP action,... what will be the final arrangement? Go to her lover, (& no longer access to hubby's credit cards); or to her husband and children? How are their reactions the same/different?

Writing style.. get's a little repetitious with the diary entries. Maybe some secret thoughts, not expressed elsewhere, could be part of that section. Otherwise, good job. Kept me reading...

Sad and unsatisfactory conclusion to an otherwise good story.

So that's why I didn't Finnish the story! wantwhitewomen

If you are on a par with Thomas Wolfe, Truman Capote, and Jack Kerouac, why would they ban a literary genius?

Putrid really

You were banned for a reason nowhitewomanwantsyou. They should ban your garbage ir stories also. They pollute the site.

pure black bull shit fuck you are you the fag that takes it in the ass after they fuck her in the ass you suck I hope your tinny cock falls off because she will get a std I hope you die slow and painful

This chapter is very repetitive to the point of being boring, not erotic. And yes, the author was banned, bot now it seems the “banned” banner is gone. Would be a much better story if the author would finish it, or let someone else finish it. Just saying . . . .

I'd just take the kids and leave, you could paint her as a bad mother pretty easily. I mean, cps I don't think would like children exposed to the type of lifestyle she craves. I mean, I didn't read the whole story just the last chapter so I dont know if she has a daughter or what but how long would it take for her to start pimping her daughter out?

I usually Iike well written cuck stories but I found this hardly qualified on either account. Littered with errors despite apparently using someone else as a proof reader - (I'd get another more competent proof reader if I was you) and was just so uninteresting, predictable and frankly boring.

I stupidly persevered thinking it may develop into something more eventually, sadly it didn't and I really found myself thinking it just a rehash of a million other similar stories done by so many other more competent writers before this attempt was inflicted upon us.

I was more than generous in giving it three out of five, a mark barely deserved.

Very sad but expected ending, the oldest sayings are still the truest. "Be careful what you wish for"

That’s a terrible story

You didn't finish the story.

Such garbage

This story got worse and worse and ended without and ending. Fucking waste of time. I hope the husband would finally grow a pair of balls and leave her if she didn't stop. Instead, he hated their relationship more everyday but kept buckling to her and BBC lovers demands. Sounds like a version of hell and it's only going to get worse.