All Comments on 'Dark Hotel Hookup'

This is such a splendid stroke story I don't know where to begin- the sleazy, sexy atmosphere, the sense of building tension. Good lord, please keep 'em cumming, I mean, keep me cunmming!!!! MOAR PLZ!!!!

(You've got me so hot, I'm using lolz! Fuck grammar, spelling, whatever!)

Taboo, sleaze, a hot mommie - it's all there! Well done.

Welcome to Lit MommmieJennifer! You and your virginal story are equally hot!

That was a hot story! Very well done. Got me hard as a rock!

keep it going

I'll be your son and won't complain when you take advantage of me, honest.

Sexy moms............WOW!

I'm not just referring to this piece, but your writing in general and overall; you're a talented writer. What I particularly enjoy is the way in which you draw the reader in until it seems as if we are almost sitting on your lap, well I can but hope.

I am starting to write for Lit and hopefully I can persuade you to read my stuff as it gets on the site. More importantly though is how can I persuade you to reply, so that we can keep in touch? Any suggestions please send to london_james2010@yahoo.co.uk

Thanks a lot and best of luck

James

The fantastic applies to that wonderful photo as well. Wow!!

Fucking hot Jennifer, just like you!

I've enjoyed both of your stories. I think they belong in the Mature category rather than in Incest.

I don't fucking care what category this is, all I know is it's fucking excellently put together and red hot, a bit like you Jennifer! xx Ken

Jennifer, you are one hot babe.

This story is one of the best.

I only wish I was younger so as I could role play with you.

Maybe we could be father & daughter!!!!???

Mommie Jennifer if you are half as hot as your heroines, I want my 8 inch rock hard cock in your pussy right fucking now!!!!! I've cummed twice reading this story and want more. Like to meet you in that sleazy hotel and see just how tight and wet your pussy really is - and then fill it to the brim with hot cum --- and then start right in and do it all again - but much slower and more deliberately so that neither one of us would forget one second of the fuck. Fucking is one of the wonderful pleasures we creatures enjoy and it "reads like" you have a love for hard core fucking sex of all kinds that far outstrips your love for writing about fucking. Come and let me fill your sweet wet pussy with my cock and cum!!!!!!!!!!!