All Comments on 'Dark Moon Ch. 03'

I am very much enjoying the tale of two misfits meating and falling in love. (I Hope) Please keep telling the tale. I have been looking forward to the 3rd chapter for now almost a week.

can't wait for more. very good writing. and great character depth. thank you for sharing. Mechmanas

I'd probably love it, if you got an editor that could help you with the errors (especially the punctuation errors in the dialog). I'm enjoying it, though, and I will keep reading.

LIKE THE STORY LINE AND I SEE A RATHER LARGE FIGHT COMING ON MORE THAN ONE FRONT

You said that it was all finished, so I'm not quite sure why you're waiting to put the chapters up. You should do one a day or something like that.

What happened to Passion? First she was so shy, but now she's dominant and controling.