All Comments on 'DarkFyre Ch. 00'

Incomplete story

3 years UNFINISHED stop now.

Oh and this prologue is a repeat of chapter 1.

The story is only half done or less before it was abandoned 3 years ago.

I'm seeing a definite overuse of adjectives, it feels almost too descriptive at times!

That is my only negative point, the storyline is refreshing and original!

I love it :)

Hmm. For some reason, not only has a duplicate of this chapter posted (which I submitted twice mistakenly) but the post of Chapter One, which was up earlier this afternoon, is now gone. Trying to figure out what the problem is, folks. Thanks for your patience.

So far so good. I like the picture you paint. Glad he's not all brawn no brains. This could be a very engaging tale. I hope you post frequently.

Good luck.

could be interesting, please continue