by earlbrowder
I'm not really into the Taboo/Incest scene, but at least your depictions of the sex between them were very good, and uninhibited.
Thx
John
Obviously you need part 4....Billy, GrandMa and Patty...Billy gets to bang his mom!
If you readers have never expeienced the love of a mature woman, you are missing out......
PAINFULL TO READ, NOT SEXY, EROTIC OR SENSUAL. NO LOVE OR WARM FEELINGS JUST COLD AND USING SEX TO MASTIBATE EACH OTHER. LEARN TO WRITE AND TRY AGAIN.
You should have quit after chapter one. I think you are writing for quantity.. however quality of story is weak. There's so much you could do with this story. Slow down and write better more personal "REAL" stories.
I had a wonderful romance as a teen with my grandmother and she spoiled me with her knowkledge, energy, soft breasts, taste, and total focus that I skipped dating school friends after trying a few closer to my age.
Mature women are so wonderful, loving, and considerate. They are also knowledgeable about what they want, need, and what they have missed all those years without a husband or lover.
Five them the emotional and intellectual respect they deserve. I LOVE GRANDMOTHER STORIES.........
stories can be long, complicated, emotional, and multiple ages involved. If you have never suckled a mature womans beast that is so soft (you call it sag), warm, pliable (you call it flattened), and still fully sensitive to strong and dedicated attention.
In addition to all the fucking and pussy and cock sucking going on, perhaps the author could incorporate a little pee time into one of his stories. Grandma wearing sexy panties and needing to piss so badly she can't hold it back any longer and just dribbles in the crotch or pisses through the crotch.
Maybe grandma wants a little golden nectar from Billy and he pisses in her mouth or drowns her big teats.
Hey man, I loved the first two chapters but I really lost interest when the UPS guys also got involved. It killed the story dead, for me. Just sayin.
Sorry, you TOTALLY ruined this episode with the truly insane public shows and the insane inclusion of the UPS guy, in granny's EVER-SPIRALING, OUT-OF-CONTROL URGE TO FLAUNT AND SHOCK.
STORY LOST its special "relationship appeal".
Aaand there goes that story.
Shame, for it was damn good for two chapters and I wanted to read more. I don't know what the ratio of male readers who enjoy reading about a 2nd guy joining the fun versus the number of male readers who would rather eat a bucket of centipedes, but it can't favor the former, surely? I just don't get it.
He’s 25 she’s52? His mom and grandmother had kids at 13 and 14? He can have his great grandmother at65 in the next chapter and gggrandma at 78 after her!!!