by JANAMARIE
Inovative cure to a very real problem. Could this treatment be passed by the FDA
Unlike the vast majority of the other writers on these pages you have the unique ability to bring the reader right into the story. Your use of dialogue also makes you shine far above the other writers. PLEASE keep up your good work. .
When I read your stuff I feel as if I am right there in the middle of the scenes with your pricicpal characters.
Please keep up with your great stories
Great father daughter story, though a second chapter would be nice. Well done 5++ stars