All Comments on 'Daughter of Treason Ch. 04'

But I am curious what will come next, what choices will she make when it comes to protecting the fellow she loves and dealing with threats around them.

Am really enjoying your story. Please watch the he and she (sometimes forget the s in she), and her/she. Otherwise a great story and can't wait to see where it goes. Good job!!

Good chapter. It's nice to see new a chapter after a bit of a hiatus.

beautiful

Only thing that I will point out about this chapter is that when you first brought up the elf needing the metal for his hammer the story at that point said that he was going to be making it out of Mithril but then after he gets brought home to Kei and tells her what had happened the metal was changed to Adamantium.

I noticed that too.

This rapidly turning into one of my favorite series. Great action, appealing characters, and hot erotic elements. nicely done.