All Comments on 'Daughters of Darwin Ch. 00: Prologue'

Aggh, "grinded" is not a word! You use it enough that I have difficulty reading your work :( The word is "ground". She ground her pelvis, not she grinded her pelvis!

How extraordinary unchaining.

Thanks for the short introduction. Now I know not to read further.

Hey everybody,

Literotica editor Bumblecat has agreed to proofread my story, and this chapter has already been reuploaded with her edits. I hope you will find it easier and more pleasing to read (and, of course, error-free now).