All Comments on 'Daughter's Revenge'

oh my gosh this was amazing i wish i were the father! I wouldn't have any reservations about fucking my daughter.

Grammar errors all over the place.

What in the name of all that's holy is "ravaging humor" ????????

Keep trying...just review your work.....

English must not be your first language because your wording was bizarre. "Now is the time we must stop our avoidance"? Terrible.

It distracts from the story when you use words incorrectly.

Let's hear it for World "Peace". The next "piece" of music is my favorite song.

You "clang" a bell. You "cling" to someone. In the past, you "clung" to someone.

I didn't finish reading your story.

Don't know if I can condone it, but I can understand it.