All Comments on 'Daughter's Visit'

Will you be my DADDY?! PLEASE!

Okay Story, needed a lot more sex scenes though. Made me cum twice!! :p

While the story itself had great, descriptive sex scenes, I also didn't get why you switched from first person to third person? Also, the ending seemed kind of abrupt, but the story still had a good pace.

hey its a great story but WHAT ABOUT AIDS N HEPATITIS N OTHER LIFE THREATENING INFECTIONS

no idea if it was any good, I spent too much time trying to keep track of your changes between perspectives.

I want to be that daughter! great sex scenes, that's the only reason we read, no? also, I love a good deflowering, & this story had an exciting one. keep up the good work!

I really enjoy your imagination. Keep going. Thanks

Confusing perspectives, and a little too short! Did all his friends cum over?

Just fantastic, one of the greatest! Chapter two please.

Nice short story.Great fantasy!

WISH I WAS THERE TO HELP HIS DAUGHTER AND THEM THERE TO HELP MINE TO

i wish you had kept it between the two of them so much more intimate that way

I'm not usually into incest stories but this one is so hot and made me hard and horny. Please tell us more.

Wow what an awesome story. I’ve never had kids, but if I had and if it was a girl I’d hope that she would like sex as much as I do. And if I’d had boys I’d want then to have as much sex and enjoy it as much as I do, be my partner female or male. Sex is awesome in all forms.