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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Ditto to very hot!

No need to elaborate.

18rabbit18rabbitover 15 years ago
uh, the kid?

not to be a killjoy, but what about the nephew he left in an empty house?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nicely done

I am drawn to stories like this...older, kind male with younger eager lover. Very hot and well written! Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
nice start

BUT......what about the kid ffs! lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Erotic, I guess, but raises a few questions about the abandoned kid, STD's, and boy friend fidelity.

Obviously these concerns are just distractions from you fantasy. But your disregarding them makes the story less believable and more farytalish. I would say more appealing to a less mature mind.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Babysitter?

Doesn't the babysitter, babysit? So what happened to the baby when David took Amber home?

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