All Comments on 'David's Friend Vivian Ch. 01'

I can hardly wait. This story really got me excited, Thorilla.

... as usual. This was worth waiting for.

Yes, well worth the wait. This story (and Part 2) got me so excited. Eagerly awaiting Part 3.

Thank you.

This is one if my favorite activities... and you've captured the essence of two people just completely enjoying each other!

I really enjoyed your story.

Well written, good attention to detail and unhurried. One of the best!

Deliciously erotic!

Bravo. What a naughty little minx Ms Vivian is. I loved the build up where the reader is still uncertain whether Vivian knows that David is looking up her skirts. I can't wait to get my breath back and read more of this well crafted story.

Total fucking rubbish

I found the story to be very interesting but better suited for maybe a 12 year old boy, not 18 years. I understand the age requirements for these stories and adjust the ages in my imagination. Using knickers in place of panties is such a turnoff for me, but I understand this takes place somewhere in England and knickers is more used than panties, although David call them panties one time. I enjoyed the story and will find and read chapter 2. Thanks

Years since this was posted, but better late than never. A sublime beginning. I look forward to reading the following chapters. Thank you Thorilla.