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Click hereShe'd often wondered why Alex hung on. What kept her going when she thought Lucien was dead? Why she didn't simply go on with her life and find somebody new? Move on? Wouldn't it have been easier than clinging to the thin shred of hope that never seemed to die? Now, bending to plug a Christmas candle into the socket, placing the tiny light on the windowsill to shine like a dim beacon of hope in the darkness; she understood. When you loved someone, what choice did you have?
Second read. Enjoying at least as much as the first one. Odd how "Kokumthena" is spelled three different ways 😳 .
Enjoyed the story but found the editing sorely lacking. Misplaced words, missing words mispelled words, and a poor grasp of the use of commas, to name a few, were distractions that eroded the overall impact of this work. Nonetheless, I plan on reading the rest of the "Dawn" series and hope I have accurately deduced the timeline. (A brief note on the timeline of the related works might have been helpful. Thanks for your effort!
There needs to be more. You can't just leave Patrick out in the cold like that! Well you can, but what the heck? What happens to him and the girl? What about Janine? I loved this story, but I feel the ending was rushed. Thank you for a wonderful read, please keep writing!!!
Just found this and read it all in two days. tried to give it 10 stars. an incredible read as far as i am concerned.