All Comments on 'Dawn's Case'

Interesting story I know from experience that if your wife is a virgin when you marry her it can take a bit of time to deflower her as in my own experience it took nearly two weeks and happened towards the end of our fortnight on. Honeymoon but Thankfully nothing as Dramatic as this was needed to eventually pop her cherry but there was a bit of an ordeal but that’s for another day and nowhere as interesting as this Story

Seemed unrealistic to me. Plus the spelling errors were very disappointing considering the number of people available to help with spelling and punctuation.