All Comments on 'Daybreak Ch. 04'

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starry_nightstarry_nightabout 15 years ago
Nice!

They're so cute together even when they're just talking. Can't wait to find out why the bad guy wants her. Thanks for writing!

spearman1spearman1about 15 years ago
Holy Crap!!!

NO!NO!NOOOOO!!! You can't just stop it like that! Oh that was sooo mean!! Next chapter please!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I love this!

You write very good stories, I love the sexual tension build up. I can read you stories for the sex or just the story, wither makes me happy. Thanks so much! and I can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
As the song goes...

More, more, MOREEEEEEEEE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
sweet...

and cant wait for the next chapter.

lilwolfspiritlilwolfspiritabout 15 years ago
Delightful!!

i loved this chapter, great work and keep up the excellent writing and thanks again for posting!!

PseudonymAPseudonymAabout 15 years ago
Yay!

I'm loving this story (possibly even more than the last one!)

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