All Comments on 'Deal Closer Ch. 01'

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Anonymousalmost 17 years ago

Outstanding!

Hi, You are a great storyteller. Very well wrtten. Look forwad to future postings. Thank for sharing your talent & imagination. L.

Anonymousabout 16 years ago

Yeah, again.

This one doesn't wear out. Ahhhhh. Yessss. Worked again.

Anonymousover 15 years ago

Fucking HOT

I read all t chapters and stayed hard the entire time!

Anonymousover 13 years ago

Yeah!

Works every time!

dinkyboots almost 12 years ago

this is a bit steamy

PG564E over 7 years ago

Really like how your story is unfolding.

Very erotic to read of a guy's transformation sexually. Made me very hard and wanting more.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...

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