All Comments on 'Deal 'Em!!'

please continue bro/sis love is the purest love. please keep them exclusive.

Reminds me of teen years with my sister

I've read several of your stories so far. You do a great job of writing hot. short stories, with a beginning, middle, and end...which keep me....very interested.

no background no character development and no end all equal another waste of time from bassbelly.

touching, I thot he would cum in her, causse he allways screwed things up.

I greatly enjoyed a bit of amusement along with my fave literotica; brother sister incest! Keep up the good work! Jim

Should have been some description when the sister lost all her clothes though. I had to reread to realize she was naked. Also would have created more tension with a description of the naked sister.

More graphic text needed to paint the pictures!

Thanks for writing.