All Comments on 'Dean has an Older Lover Ch. 01'

by FLrider

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chytownchytownalmost 4 years ago
Best One Of Your Stories I Have Read.*****

Sexy and romantic. Good read. Thanks for sharing.

litereader54litereader54about 11 years ago
Great

GREAT story - could use a little editing for spelling & punctuation but otherwise GREAT

plugszplugszabout 11 years ago
great work

good read on this one, looking forward to Ch 02

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
fantastic

keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
looking forward...

...to you continuing the story; nice job FLrider !!

oldnornryoldnornryabout 11 years ago
A beautiful story

It was a perfect build-up and flow. I felt like I was in dean's shoes. It brought back memories, and I have been in every one of those scenarios.

Keep writing. Maybe there will be a Ch. 2?

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