All Comments on 'Dear Diary'

WOW WHAT A FANTASTIC STORY YOU WRITE. DEAR DIARY WAS SO VERY EROTIC NOW ANOTHER PART OR TWO WOULD BE EXCELLENT TO READ.

but please try to avoid clichés - your title, for a start: how many hundreds of stories are there in the internet with exactly that title? - Freddythesmall

...her inner thoughts were so intimate and real that I could taste it! More, please.

I love your build up, it makes the story really work. I continue to enjoy your work, thanks.

Stories like this keep the standard off the scale!

You have to look long and "hard" to find a real tale of seduction, but this is it, written with real sensitivity and tact. All I can say is thank you very much, and please keep up the good work!

You're still the best writer I have read. I love it and wish there was more. Thank you.

of course you can, if you really liked it then what was the harm in it

The story is short but well developed. Please follow up with a part 2 in their clandestine affair. I would love to see how their relationship develops further. You did a fantastic job of illustrating the scene in the stall. I enjoy how Miss. A takes control. Very arousing.

Loved this story, looking forward to read the others you wrote.

Enjoyed your lesbian story very much, well written.