All Comments on 'Dear Diary Ch. 06'

by Manofthehillpeople

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WilliamTellsOvertureWilliamTellsOverturealmost 14 years ago
I really liked the well written interlocution between the characters...

... everyone seems to preach the desire to be on their best behaviour, yet give in to temptation without a moral struggle none the less. Seems deep down inside, these individual family members are only too eager to discard the formal conventions of society. Found Chapter 6 hot, fun and very sexy. Although I must confess I hadn't known of this story before (only found it because I perused the NEW section where this chapter was posted as submitted), I'll have to go read through Chapters 1 to 5 as well. Your nickname is familiar to me because I remember reading the first few chapters of Temptation some years ago. Now that I know you've greatly expanded on your literary endeavours, I think I'll visit all of your stories and have some fun. Thank you for a good piece of tale (pun intended).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

So Michelle is a kind of person who have never raised his hand against his daughter and that's the reason Marie fucked him and even dare to slap him

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