by Hecksithia
Sorry, Idea's good but the thoughts are disorganized. Try taking the other hand out of your panties, wiping the cum juice off and typing with both hands: see if that makes your next story is better ( and yes, please let me know when you write it because I LIKED what you were ATTEMPTING to tell us!)
( And you have my consent to use the idea of the lady typing with one hand and masturbating with the other while she writes a Literotica story! )
Check out my most recent fantasy story: Very different from yours, but you might enjoy it
A Maiden's Dream on the Eve of St. Agnes' Day - She will surely see her future husband.
Submitted by Abdulbenthere (Romance) 12/18/10
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=508760
You might also enjoy my darker story about getting what you wish for:
Carol, Jack, Tats and Rex the Shapeshifter
by Abdulbenthere© Literotica NonHuman
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=470384