by L.A. Wicker
you killed his mother what the hell. you had the perfect happy ending going and ruined it.--
I truly loved the story it had me crying at the end why didnt you say what happened to the mother-wife you should have included it in the story.please write more chapters ok.
What a great idea to keep the story in the family - hope that it continues and that Grandpa get with the females of the families too -
You had a great story goimng and you killed the story withat ending why did you let your mother die she would have let you have your daughter same as she let you have her,it was a sda ending and you can write better
I think this is the right thing what u did, mother died. this is a new kind of mom son story plot. why allways the mom son story would be same like they love each other, have sex between them and a happy ending? a change must be need like this for some times. wicker u r one of the best mom/son author, we need more new kind of mom son authoring from u.
This is a great story of really hot motherfucking, with an objection at the end of my comment. I love how Robert's mother is so excited by her boy's big prick, she can't get her hand around it it's so fat, it's a real mommy-pleaser. That quote at the title is so very true of plenty of boys--the ones who get to stick their prick up the cunt of their dreams, their own mother's cunt. And it's great that Robert fucks a baby up his mother's mommy-twat, the icing on the cake for proud, grinning young motherfuckers. Robert and his mom get married, now as his mom's young husband he has his big dick up between his mother's legs more than it's just hanging between his legs. But the death of his mom is just too tragic and a terrible letdown. You shouldn't have done that to your faithful readers, Mr. Wicker.
Why oh why did you end such a beautiful story the way you did. Tragic. Is it to be continued with him and his daughter?
Can I get a continuation or extension let's see where it goes with his daughter sister please please please please please!
...and probably some other relationships. Beside being the father. What a mess (but sexy to incest lovers). I am all for incest but I really don't like babies to be involved. But I realize that these are just stories, I am afraid that it goes on in real life much more than it should. Oh, well.
and doing it with the daughter he fathered by his mother is just amazing...if he gets her pregnant he will be his own grandfather.....love it....
Your story is so full of illiterate grammar and misspelled words that it had no erotic effect at all. "Lye" is not a verb form. Lye is a caustic substance that used to be placed on the ground to make construction lines. What an idiot you are.
I usually skip to the end of stories to check for shit like this. What's the point? I come here to escape from my troubles. Not drown in them.
You should of lead it to mom being rushed to hospital and her getting saved but handy capped but ether way it was grate story more of the same
The abrupt ending without any explnation killed it for me. Still up to that point it was an excellent, story.
Was a good 5 star story until the end , if you call it that. Sorry 3 stars
I don't understand why you have to kill the mother.
It could have end with a good note.
LA, Don't know why you killed off mom. Such a tragic ending for mom and son who were so deeply in love. I had expected another type ending...
I really enjoyed your story! Hope you add to it. I will continue to look for your writings in the future.