All Comments on 'Death a Bit Premature'

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The NavigatorThe Navigatorover 13 years ago
Priceless

What more needs to be said?

bruce22bruce22over 13 years ago
Good Fun

as always! The hidden power of the Insurance companies is out there! I am a bit surprised that he wasn't arrested as either and illegal alien or a terrorist. But he always has fun and justifies his presence on an erotic site.

m48gunnerm48gunnerover 13 years ago
Fun-

Just a fun story to read....love Debra, and July of course!

JusttooldJusttooldover 13 years ago
laugh

True government paper shuffling. This was a fun story to read and put a smile on my face. Next time hide the candy in the furnace room wives never look there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Oh YEAH!

Loved it. The government at work for you. I loved the solution and believe me I will remember it. You never know when the government will decide you are dead, but you can bet it will happen AFTER they owe YOU money. Wonderful story.

Scorpio44Scorpio44over 13 years ago
This story was like a flashback!

Five months of no checks and no credit cards or driver's license wasn't the worst. I had been evicted! Dead men don't need an apartment! Wish I'd read this long ago.

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Creative!

I would have just gone to my local Congressman's office. He has a large, taxpayer funded staff to deal with this sort of nonsense. But I like your solution better!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
:)

Great story, if it wasnt so close to the truth it would be even funnier

OldStormyOldStormyover 13 years ago
"For Real" funny

I had a huge giggle while reading this. I am currently going through a stupid battle with Centrelink (Aussie Pensions Preventative Office) who have severely slashed my pension because a private company I have some shares in showed a profit in 08-09. A loss in 09-10 is discounted as the tax return has not yet been formalised. It only showed a profit if you discounted the loans that were more than the assets. Enough, you don't want to hear, but bloody hell, aren't Government departments wonderful. "Sorry Sir, I am unable to help you, you need to contact ......." Thanks heaps.

Anyway, loved your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hilarious

VERY good read!

0649d0649dover 13 years ago
good non-erotic mature story

It's lucky he had life-insurance; most people wouldn't have one. It also does make me wonder how the government even keeps track of dead people. I hear a lot of fraud happens because of newborn babies who die prematurely have their Social Security ID stolen? Anyway... how do you prove you're alive otherwise? haha nice topic! XD I guess you could try your local congressman/woman or senator but I am cynical enough to wonder how much they would care about your situation. Nice read, keep up the good work :)

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 12 years ago
Use bureaucracy to fight bureaucracy -

Nice idea and I bet it really would work perfectly too

Nice work MGM

chytownchytownalmost 5 years ago
Great Read*****

Your stories are so much fun to read. Thanks for sharing.

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