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Click hereAlso, I would really appreciate it if you would take a moment to give me feedback and/or vote.... This is my second piece of work and I have put a lot of effort into it.
Thanks in advance!
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 11 years agofor me your ideas are beautiful, slightly scary, very sexy madness. worth reading to get off, and worth looking over afterwards too :) thanks
Keith1962almost 12 years agoThank you for a really awesome story i find myself wishing i was there!
more please
Anonymousabout 18 years agophrases left me slightly confused. But practice is what it takes to learn, and you have enough talent and imagination to do well. Good luck to you.
rainyguyabout 18 years agoThis has a pleasurable flow to it. A wonderful use of language in an elegance and rawness. Graceful and enjoyable for both mind and body. The only thing I might say is refine and incorporate more similes and metaphors but all in all, a nice read.
Anonymousabout 18 years agomore developed than your first story and less spontaneous. something to be done after the first story for relaxation after you have gotten to "know" your partner.
i enjoyed them both for different reasons. my pleasure and hope your dreams are real.
