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Click hereAlso, I would really appreciate it if you would take a moment to give me feedback and/or vote.... This is my second piece of work and I have put a lot of effort into it.
Thanks in advance!
Peace
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 11 years agofor me your ideas are beautiful, slightly scary, very sexy madness. worth reading to get off, and worth looking over afterwards too :) thanks
Keith1962about 12 years agoThank you for a really awesome story i find myself wishing i was there!
more please
Anonymousabout 18 years agophrases left me slightly confused. But practice is what it takes to learn, and you have enough talent and imagination to do well. Good luck to you.
rainyguyabout 18 years agoThis has a pleasurable flow to it. A wonderful use of language in an elegance and rawness. Graceful and enjoyable for both mind and body. The only thing I might say is refine and incorporate more similes and metaphors but all in all, a nice read.
Anonymousabout 18 years agomore developed than your first story and less spontaneous. something to be done after the first story for relaxation after you have gotten to "know" your partner.
i enjoyed them both for different reasons. my pleasure and hope your dreams are real.
Anonymousabout 18 years agoArousing on a physical and mental level. Never thought someone could use 'circumnavigate' in a sex story and make it sound quite so good;) This writer's operating on several levels. Good girl=)~B
danwesabout 18 years agoThis LADY has really experienced the things she writes of and communicates those thoughts and feelings excellently. I, too, have experienced all of these activities; the feelings, thoughts and emotions. When I read her two stories I relive my own past experiences and they are such wonderful memories. I do not have my partner anymore and some of the memories had begun to dim, but, with this lady's excellent communications skills, my memories have been brought back to life and I enjoy them immensly. THANK YOU!
the_Revelatorabout 18 years ago...I'll eat,,,um,,,,the author out! I felt this story to my core. Please post more "real life" fantasy for all of us to enjoy.
lizardoabout 18 years agoI have read and reread this story, each time it resulted in the same throbbing reaction. Temper certainly knows how to put the reader in the action.
Anonymousabout 18 years agoThis is one of the most erotic stories I have ever read.I would give so much to be able to write the emotionsthat I feel while making love.Temperenceless has done it so well.Please continue to write.I look forward to reading all of your stories.You are an amazing writer.Dave.
