All Comments on 'Deathstalker'

Thank you! Best read I have had in this genre in quite awhile.

Vay here from MGU, I have already read this a while back on MGU but I felt you deserved a comment on here too lol. Once again this is just so awesome, you are truly wonderful when it comes to weaving a story, I can not wait to see more.

this was very interesting and some wat new. I like it a lot would like to read more thank you

Very interesting story. I enjoyed it alot. Thanks

A great story! I'm glad to see you're doing the less human-like monster girls--I always thought they were more interesting.

I like how you've given your girls that compatibility-sense. I don't remember if that is an actual mamano trait or not, but I like it here--means that the reader can expect more of the relationship than just the sex, which is always a good thing in my opinion.

Truly awesome story you have here Perentie. Also saw a comment by you on http://mjm202036.pbworks.com... gods that dude made the best setting ever for monster girls. I wish others would also pick up on this area. Kudos to you Perentie and I hope you can write a few more stories.

your fantasy world is very well constructed and your characters are refreshingly different. Keep up the good work and I look forward to your future works.

This is spectacular, it is well done. Please write a sequel exploring their lives, and ?children?. Keep this genre in all your stories, wow!!!!!! Gentle loving female mamanos, great job!

Another masterwork. I always loved the Girtiblilu, and I'm glad you didn't just conveniently "forget" about her stinging habit. It's a particularly nice bonus that the romantic and emotional elements of your stories don't take a backseat to the sex; meaningless sex is just that. Meaningless. I really hope you'll continue to explore the MGE world, because you have an incredible talent for this. Perhaps Gargoyle or Sea Bishop, next?

-OHP-

Absolutely love it!! Terriffic story telling and an amazing world!

I loved it. You have a way of making a scorpion sexy. Would love a follow up to see how their life is turning out and kids. Great job.

I read Viridian Ninja first, before coming to find this. Very nice. I like the stories you're weaving as well as the world you're building in these stories.

Great like previous commenter i read viridian ninja and must say i love your stories and cant get enough goin to read the next one now

I so enjoyed the story ,wished there was more .....what about the children ????

Stephen J

i love your stories so far i read all of them i wanted to know if you plan on making more or are you going to make a series but either one you make im going to read either way

Read all your stories so far and just have to say you really really REALLY need to get back to making more.

Seriously I never thought that a Girtablilu and a Mantis would appeal to me (because I was always a dragon and dragon sup-species man) but the way you write them impresses me a lot.

I like this and the other one think you could make series

Great story! Please keep writing monster girl fics. :)

simply the best monster girls writer in the world.

More stories like these please.

I love chase sequences. This one was perfect! And it ended with them actually liking each other instead of one quickie.

5/5!

Very good job, well written

Please write more

Please write more stories about other monster girl species like matango, tentacle plant, manticore, baphomet, kikimora, and queen slime

Ooh yeah, nothing like some hot sexy scorpion-gal on human action, and there was a story in between all that which is amazing! 5/5 for you! I definitely wouldn't mind hearing more about Chanda and Kenneth, or a new story altogether about more mamono gals.

Ever since I first read monster musume and found the monster girl encyclopedia I've always had a fascination with the more "interesting" monster girls, glad to see them. Great story and look forward to reading more of your stuff

Always a lot of explaining and dreaming about a girl when the guy is held down and should be making an escape. Besides what she looks like we get whole back story and history of her people. That can come after he breaks free

Great story, brilliant world building. It kind of gives me Star Wars vibes. The action was pretty cool too.

Fun und Zexxi!

11/10 Solar Stones!!!!!

Great reading. Like I was standing next to them, so lively. More, more, we are hooked.

Au revoir, Perentie

Good story. For first time I have read a story around scorpion-women. U should write more on such beings.

Read Viridian Ninja recently. Except for name and "monster> changes, this was just another rehash of the same tale for me.