All Comments on 'Decades Ch. 03'

by YDB95

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cliffhanger20cliffhanger20over 11 years ago
WELL OVER 18 I'D SAY

You have hit the nail on the head in every time line portrayed in this story. How do I know? Been there done that. Damn good story. And your philosophy regarding the good old days is correct. There were bad times and good times. But it sure was fun being young!

mammoetmammoetalmost 11 years ago
great story

Ch.04 please

fanfarefanfareover 9 years ago
Ahm the good old days!

I remember years ago having a book titled "The Good Old Days - They were terrible!". It was a collection of late 19th/early 20th Century editorial cartoons.

Graphic descriptions of pollution, lack of public sanitation and personal hygiene. Epidemics of disease and crime and poverty and ignorance. Political corruption and legal injustice and lynchings and mobs in the street.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A little too contrived

I like the story overall, but this chapter the scenario with Jimmy seems a bit too contrived. They all could have simply piled in the van while the two guys beat the crap out of Jimmy, without having to do all the sex scenes, especially giving Jimmy a blowjob.

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