All Comments on 'Deceive Me Not'

Well written as well

I enjoyed your story, and it would have been hot even without the bit at the end about Kyra being a succubus.

Knowing that Kyra was a succubus made me wonder why things did not start the first night they met.

Also, Nonhuman would have been a more appropriate category for stories where a central character is a vampire, werewolf, or succubus.

Please continue to write and submit.

Nonhuman would have been more fitting.

Also have to say I really enjoyed the story. Vivid sex scenes, intriguing storyline and well written prose made reading it a (twitchy) pleasure!

Hot :)

That's unusual.

Wow! Incredible build up to the sex, and very graphic description of the act. And to top it off, that unexpected twist in part 3. I did not see that coming. Amazing story.

Love this story a lot. Didn't need to have Kyra as a succubus, though, since it was really hot without that bit needing to be added.

Would like to see more stories involving Kyra, though. Get a couple more going! =D

Wow... I don't know how I missed this story until now. It is very well written and probably one of the hottest stories in Lit. It's score does not do it justice as it is easily worth 5 stars. It is a shame the author has not written again... such talent from a 1st time author.

That is all.

Great twists and turns. Was trying to figure out how this was fantasy until the very end. Well done. Wicked hot.