All Comments on 'December Rain Ch. 02'

Nicely written! (A bit short, though.) Clearly, the plot was thought out, and being unable to get a hotel room without ID or credit card is, indeed, difficult.

[whiplash warning. So, why is it such a controversy to have photo ID for voting? Okay, completely unrelated to this story.]

Nice work. Looking forward to ch.03.

I would agree with lonestar, that each chapter is a little short, but I've liked what you've written so far.

Well thought out progressive story, Nice writing. Worth a four at least

Will there be a CH 3?

Good writing. Story can be expanded and Love can be found again.

This is going to be a fun read. Thanks for sharing.