by Danae72
It ended a little too fast. I would have liked this chapter to have been split in half, and then had more about them discovering the truth about the mystery, dealing with Hunter, etc.
I had to come back and read you stories again. Since all the comments are gone, I had to add one. It was great to have Harley and Blue back a supporting characters in this storyline. It was interesting how insecure Riley was because of his looks - yet he knew he was smart - and how you explained where those insecurities came from. Great job. As with all your stories, it would be fun to have more about these characters but even more I look forward to seeing what you come up with next.
Nice and etc., but...somethings was missing. I'm not exactly sure what. But I enjoyed this ;)
Finally the backbone i had been wanting Riley to grow. L☺l. Someworth rushed towards the end but still enjoyable. Keep writing.
Dharmie
It was great. The issues Riley was dealing with, and the way you only got little bits at a time helped to put you in Jacob's clueless shoes. The murder mystery they got tangled up in was amazingly done. Thanks for a terrific journey. Very well written, interesting, and even exciting in places (the sex was good too).
This whole series was beautiful with drama and romance rolled in one but I wish you could have told more about hunter using riley the way that he did other than that it's still beautiful keep on writing next time can you write about hunter and turn him into being gay and falling in love and then realizing what he lost and then finding love again?
Truly a fantastic read! Drama, mystery, sex and love. I truly hope this author is still out there writing. Five Stars every chapter!