by Mostera1
Although, you should be shot for having a baby born on Christmas Day!!!!! (It creates a lifetime of "you don't really get a birthday present"!)
Otherwise, a deliciously different type of LW story. Nicely written!
but on the reality scale its a 1.....
who the fuck gets married and not know ANYTHING about the other person?
What matters in the present, and if there are no leftovers from the past then we can enjoy it and look to the future.. Good luck in the contest.
I liked this story, but I think you could have made it a richer experience by varying the facts a little. Shelley could have willingly done one or a few porno's, including a blow bang, to help pay for college, and not particularly regretted it but be afraid of her husband's reaction. Not every girl that does sex work like porn regrets it, though of course some do. And these days no corporation would release a professsional sex vid without model consent forms, duly signed by the actors. Otherwise they could be sued by the actor, or prosecuted by the feds. As for the husband, it's a rule of thumb in porn it is very difficult for a man to get an opportunity unless he has a cute gf who will only work with him. That's why you have the same few dudes in nearly every porno.
But these are minor quibbles, you write very well, and your descriptions are excellent. I look forward to reading more of your contributions.
1. TLW story True Loving Wife story.
2. Past is past and that is the important where do you go to and not where did you come from.
3. I wish them a second daughter as well.
Great read. It's nice to see a true Loving Wives story.
What a touching TLW! So different for Loving Wives. Good luck in the contest, but it probably would did better in another section. The last sentence brought a teer to my eye. Very good! 5 stars!
Had a great time. Not too long, not too short. A relationship to look forward to. Sounds almost like a true story. Characters felt very real.
and when you find it, grab hold take it and run together forever. TK U MLJ LV NV
It is comforting to read a story where, though there is some conflict and sexual tension, a couple manage to keep hold of a loving relationship. This story was realistic enough. We all have dark clouds in our past, and we all, mercifully, have the power to change. The story was heartwarming and confirmed a hope in the power of love and forgiveness. Well done!
So far we've not had the trolls who suffer from impaired reading ability and fail to distinguish between what the people did in the past and what they do and are now.
More forgiveness would eviscerate Loving Wives as we know it now - which wouldn't be a bad thing, necessarily.
Loving Wives actually has stories about real Loving Wives, and isn't always about cheating bitches. Good to see, and this was a really good Christmas story too. 5 stars gladly given.
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First, I did like this story. Second despite that I would like to add a few thoughts I had:
- Why is Jamie so upset about his wife having made porn? He did it himself, after all. So he should not have any troubles with the whole affair (just a little surprise: "Ohhh, she did that stuff as well!"). It really took from the story when you wrote he was a "porn-star" once (and even worse than his wife).
- That she was "forced" into the porn movie was unrealistic. As one other commentor already stated, nobody especially not a commercial company would release a movie / picture without written consent from the actors / models.
What a lovely story. The imagery was excellent. Great job. Full of the Christmas spirit!
with the opening sentence, really good Chrismas story. It's nice to read about true loving wives instead of cheaters please write more
Loving wife my ass sure she didn't know she wss sucking strange cock. She be craving it again soon stupid fuckin story what a waste who the fuck are you jpb
I'm not about to read all 23 previously posted comments, so maybe someone already noted this, but this story has a nice O. Henry-type feel to it. Very nice! There can never be too much understanding and forgiveness in the world!
I thought this was a great story. A rollercoaster of a story but still it was well written and a good read, I am glad it worked out for them. As others have said a true loving wife story and a very happy ending as well, thanks for the story.
she eventually wanted to see all his videos.
"I'll even make popcorn," she laughed.
that reaction says it all. a nice tale of learning that hiding things isn't always the best course of action. glad they worked it out. at one point i thought she'd remind him she wanted to replay some of those scenes hihi
I liked this one but not as much as your other christmas story.
I think you are good. I have read your others keep it up.
Jamie thought he saw his wife doing porn but he did porn.
Shelly and her friend were drugged, taken advantage of and filmed.
Both kept secrets.
Love conquers all.
Just one more thing.
BAH HUMBUG
A true short story-got to the point very well. Interesting twist. Heartwarming with minimal excess fluff. I could learn a few things from you.
I love that they named the new son Derek. I hope they download the videos of his namesake to show him on his 16th birthday!!! 5*
It is curious that she wants to see all his videos. This could simply be curiosity, wanting to know her husband better, wanting to feel the depth of his pain. On the other hand, she endured quite a sexual experience herself, albeit more or less a rape. As is quite common in cases like that, the victim often harbors sexual fantasies about the experiences - feeling guilty for having them. Now that she knows her husband has shared a similarly shady past, it may free her from her feelings of guilt and lead her to want to explore her fantasies with her husband. So what seems to come across as a touchingly romantic story, may in fact be a kink fest in the making.
Then tells hubby she didn't know they were recording. ? One star , drivel
"Gently he set Shelly down; looking into her eyes he said, "Shelly is this what you really want?"
Well, on second thought I think I'll write grandma a letter and see what she thinks.
....what the hell is this guy smoking??
A story becomes a waste of time with this type of plot. Really, the tension goes to zero with these slut-gets-drugged stories.
What is the purpose of writing this up? The story is supposed to be about a cheating wife. If the husband is all dewy-eyed because of how mistreated his woman was years ago, where's the cheating? The drugs more or less absolve her, rightly or wrongly, so what's the point? How permissive and limp-wristed the husband can be?
Sorry, had to bail on this before the end. What a waste of ink.
Nice tale but I think the past should remain the past pity he found a video of course that opened a can of worms, but all's well that ends well.
Nice story of true love overcoming a troubled past. The last should stay there, and not intrude into your present and your future. Good loving wife story.
They named their baby after his porn star personna that he was so ashamed of???
Er....
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People, it's a Christmas story, It's supposed to be a little cheezy. Good job especially for a near beginning effort. Signed: BTW
Not sure what there is to forgive, everything happened before they where married. She was drugged and sexually assaulted and he did porn. So terrible experience for her and maybe not the best judgment on his part, but once again all before either met the other. So what exactly are they asking for forgiveness ?
First of all, she was raped. Second, he did hetero "amateur" porn big fucking deal.
That this story focuses on what he did as being somehow wrong is ridiculous. She was raped and traumatized. Her abuse is on the internet but you focus on the fact he was in a three way with two women while in disguise? Da fuk?
Yeah she was indeed raped. Maybe in some states nonconsensual oral penetration is sexual assault. Depends on state and country I suppose. She is blameless. She went to a party with a friend and was drugged and sexually abused by many men. Instead of getting tested and going to the authorities, the shame dactor as they were worried about being branded sluts (such bs), caused then to clam up and internalize. He did amateur porn. Big deal. Go in love and be happy.