All Comments on 'Dee & The Twins Pt. 03'

Please write another one! This series is really really good!

I can't believe you did it to me again. First The Broussard Sisters and now this. Finish your stories

Please add more to this story

I hope they all can heal through mutual love. thanks.

I enjoy the realism of your stories; it makes the sweet moments that much sweeter. Although I despise the n-word, I appreciate how it adds to the story.

Initially I wanted you to add another chapter but in rereading it, I see that it doesn't necessarily need another chapter. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Love, pain, loss, addiction, violence, betrayal, abuse, in short, the elements of reality woven into a remarkable tale. Jim Bob you get better with each story.

Sorry the n word comment was for another another of your stories.

Was a super downer compared to last chapter, so much so that I couldn't finish it.

Don know how everything turned to shit so badly, it didn't even feel like the same story, and I don't really want to read about a girl that has become a complete slut

Wow. I started out with high hopes, wanting to cheer Dee on as she took on life. I don't think I've ever seen a crash that bad - she went from strong but troubled straight to train wreck. It leaves me feeling like she's going to drag the twins & the baby down with her.

So Anita's fucked, Dee is a drunk meth-addict slutty dropout, and Nadia and the baby are fully dependent on her. Only Sonja is coming out of this okay, it seems, except she isn't getting paid for anything

Why did you ruin their lives? You're a real downer.