by Vitorio
It’s a decent and believable story. All stories have critics. It was an enjoyable read.
Great to have read your feedback to my earlier comments. Makes it easier for me to relate to you and your experiences. Glad you have so much fun!
vitorio is a better editor on dee´s story than he is on his own
the verb to slide conjugates as slide, slid, slid
incorrect tense here
Really loved it. Erotic and believable. Wish Dee would give us a sequel.
I always enjoy a believable erotic story, and it's easier said than done.
Loved it - this is such an erotic tale, well written (and edited!) Bravo. Would love to read more!