All Comments on 'Defiance Ch. 05'

I have been waiting for ages for you to write something new! i loved this chapter and cannot wait for the next one! Your writing style is brill! Keep it up and please don't make me wait so long for the next one!

Been waiting forever for this but soooooo worth it! I love Tate, he's so cute. I hope that evil bastard doesnt get his hands on him and get what he deserves!!! Can't wait for the next one, dont let it be too long!!! xxx

I've been waiting for this too and i sooo was not disappointed...i hope someone, possibly the brother, kills christian, possibly slowly and painfully...i be very happy theres a new story and that its still sooo awesome!

i really like this story the realetionship unfolding between lukas and tate is really sweet But they have some really big things 2 ovacum b4 they can b 2getha properly without fear

I really like the characters, plot, direction etc but the grammar errors are killing me. who is robert? i thought John and Andrew were the brothers and Davis was the father. Also, Lukas called him Tate when they got to their room. Its ''yourself'' not your self, the mistakes like dose instead of does and lose instead of loose get in the way of a really good story.

spell check, lucas or lukas? made up words?

Yes, your story does need editing... But that does not stop it from being a great read or a fantastic tale.

Mistakes happen and if you don't have an editor things are easy to miss, I definitely will not be put off from my reading such a great tale.

I thought he already gave his name. Lukas' mother called him Tate when she was fixing his hair.

And am sorry about grammar-naziness of my amusement, but "they don't usually conjugate in the same place" is the best fun in typo/word error in awhile. Awesome.

-still a great story so far.

Hi Tate nice too meet you