All Comments on 'Deflowering X-Men Babe Shadow Cat'
by Kash_the_priest
- 8 Comments
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoColossus (Daniel Cudmore) certainly *was* in the movie... throwing the Fastball Special no less than twice!
Good marks for checking her age though.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoThis one could've used a proofreading or two. Many spelling errors. I haven't actually read through the whole story yet, but I was so annoyed by two things that I just had to comment right now. Firstly, how on earth is the skin tone of a Canadian different from that of an American? Are we talking caucasians, central asians, africans? Which states/provinces are we talking about? Now do you realize how ridiculous that is? Secondly, the Colossus thing. How hard is it to check the cast list on IMDB if you haven't seen the movie? If you'd seen the movie, you couldn't possibly have missed him. These are the kind of things that detract from the enjoyment of reading a story. Too bad...
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoI have to agree with you. Ellen Page is going to be the next new, young actress. I thought she was hot in X-Men 3 but wasn't sure about her age & you know like everything about the people you write about so now I know she's over the age. Have to go and try and get her new movie Hard Candy now.
AchtungNightover 17 years agoNice job, Kash. I just read this story and really enjoyed it. You took an already attractive girl and kept her that way for the reader- not something many celebrity erotic fanfic writers can do. Great sex, believable chemistry, excellent dialogue, and bravo on the editing job. I look forward to more good work from you in the times to come.
Anonymousover 17 years agoI saw Ellen Page in X-Men & thought 'damn she's hot!' When I saw your story, I had to read it & thought it was excellent. I just watched the movie you talked about quite a lot in the story, Hard Candy & I have to say, the story seems even better the second time around. You seemed to have gotten a good description on her personality, from mixing the two movies. Excellent.
Anonymousover 14 years agoEllen Page is one of my top fantasies. Along with Kristen Bell and Amy Adams. So I appreciate the hot inspiration. But the grammar issues were pretty distracting. But I am pretty anal. Pun intended.
