All Comments on 'Delaware Ch. 01'

<p>Since I live about 30 miles from Delaware and have a background in the study of history, it's interesting to have someone from Scandinavia tell me a lot about it I didn't know.</p>

<p>Winterfrog has a dry, backhanded way of discribing things that is just naturally funny to me. But so far this story is even funnier than usual. This chapter is mostly historical background, both the history of his country's involvement with Delaware, and the history of the little group of people who are obviously going to be the debauched perpitrators of kinky illicit sex in future chapters.</p>

<p>I shall await furthur developments with anticipation.</p>

Go, Frog, Go! And if you kick some ass along the way, so much the better.

Boyd

... but good. The introduction is a way to long. Maybe a line-oppressor <b>;-)</b>. Nevertheless the hook at the end will hopefully promise a suspense-packed story.

<p>Can't wait</p> http://www.vitalienbrueder.de/warten.jpg

<p><b>Nucleus</b></p>

Your writing just keeps getting better. Thanks for

all the pleasure you bring.

Loved the setup. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thanks for sharing.

Let me see if I have this right... The wife EMMA gets involved in a theater group where everyone is fucking everyone else. The Husband knows about this ... and the wife obviously knows a great deal more about this since she works at the theater company.

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He says NOTHING... and she says nothing.

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According to the time line While the Husband does not Know about this secret sexual society of Rolf & Samuel BOTH frderic and Emma know all about the secret sex stuff going on while they all ahem "practice"

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<b> How is this in anyway believeable? What sort of marriage do they have where juicy Gossip stuff like this is never discussed -- not even one time according to the story-- once betweeen them as Husband and wife!?!? </b>

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If EMMA cheats -- and she wil of course -- How does Frederic the Husband say anything? He knwos what is going on and he has said nothing all this time.

what mindfuck ask for this,write your stories at one time and stop teasing.it hard to follow the start with into english,stop making it hard to understand.just write your stories all at one time.

I think you could have put this story in the Group sex instead of Loving wifes because everyone in the story was into getting into sex but anyway its a good story.

Sorry Winterfrog. You are a very good writer but I just don't understand what is happening in this 1st chapter of your current story entitled, "Delaware." You bring in Delaware in America to the story as background and then I get confused as to which text refers to Delaware in USA and what is taking place in Norway. You had the story edited so I just don't know what's with me confusion. RAG

Sorry Winterfrog. You are a very good writer but I just don't understand what is happening in this 1st chapter of your current story entitled, "Delaware." You bring in Delaware in America to the story as background and then I get confused as to which text refers to Delaware in USA and what is taking place in Norway. You had the story edited so I just don't know what's with me confusion. RAG

by the readers as "Delaware" seems to be the title of the planned theatre play (I'm curious whom they'll send to America after the theatre season to get rid of him...), so everything takes place in Sweden (not Norway which belonged to Denmark during the 17th century - only Sweden was the scandinavian "winner" of the war 1618-48 in Middle Europe).

It's a good start of Winterfrog's story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter(s) - hope they don't take too long.

regardless what Harryin says, the story is promising. Just a little short. Hope the rest follows soon and develops in your usual way.

G.Belgium

Thanks for a great start to another WF treat! I anxiously await more.

I am guessing you are Swedish based on your Delaware lore. Yes I DID visit the Kal-Mar when I lived in Delaware. I like your connection. Cheers!

Go back and read the damned story properly and don't skim through the tale this time. That's the reason half you buggers can't figure out what's going on in the tales that you claim to have read. If you do then it might sink into your head, that they are putting on a play about a guy who got caught a couple of hundred years previous in flagrante delicto with his CO's misses and was consequently sent to Delaware as a penance. Sorry if any of the big words that I've used, confuse you.

Jesus, I despair of some folks reading abilities. DC

I got a minor head ache after going back and forth checking what exactly you were saying in each sentence, that is once I finishesd each extentended clause and seemingly endless tangents. And this problem has nothing to do with English. It's about planning what you want to say and the order in which you are planning doing it. This one was chaotic.

Once reconstructedand filtered I figure thatthe substance for a comic plot could be there but even on this level I could not understand the POV of the narrator. Is he or isn't he the husband whose wife is supposed to get ready to cheat? You could have fooled me, I would have thought he is a UN observer providing a report about some far away conflict.IT'S HIS WIFE HE IS REPORTING for crying out loud. I like you very much the frog but I am going to take two tylenols after this chapter!

I personally found your story easy to read and comprehend. Will our hero be proactive and tell his wife what he knows, which as for now is very little other then the plans of one of the actors, Ronny Hedman towards his wife? I don’t see any problem with the way it is written though we Yanks say Boy-Toy not Toy-Boy<P>I am so looking forward to your next chapter. Thank you for the good entertainment<P>PT

Kind Sir....Please give us the next chapter....I am waiting with bated breath for chapter 2....come on, I know things are laid back in Sweeden but your fans are waiting....Reb....pinetree640@yahoo.com

I saw chapter 2 the night I read the first chapter. It was posted on your stories site. I read the last paragraph and went to another story. When I returned to your site the second chapter was removed. Why the delay with the posting since it is already written?

Half the time it does not make any sense!!! May-hap he should write in Norwegian!!!!!!!!!! Absolute crap!!!

Just old folks.

Why ? Cuzz, I love me some " old folks" sex stories.

porn and sex rules the libidox. TK U MLJ LV NV

when she heard "drinks are on the house" she went and got a ladder

What kind of games will they play? We'll see...

A promise of interesting trouble coming -

Thought I had read all of Winterfrog's submissions but had missed this one, always a good yarn.

Let's see where the WF takes us this time.

IT'S NOT TRUE that "purchasing such a property was the best investment he could make to reduce his taxes"!That's A NONSENSE because you said earlier in the story that this man WAS RETIRED!So,HE HAD NO EARNINGS ANYMORE that could be taxed!

Also,THERE ARE SOME HISTORICAL MISTAKES in this story!Delaware WAS NOT "the first state to join the United States"(that's A STUPIDITY because THERE WAS NO FIRST STATE TO JOIN THE U.S.,but THE 13 COLONIES which declared independence in 1776 as the United States of America!),but THE FIRST STATE TO RATIFY THE CONSTITUTION OF THE UNITED STATES,in 1787!

Then,Johan Prinz was in fact called Johan PRINTZ and IT'S NOT TRUE AT ALL that the Swedish colony that he lead "had a small garrison of only 24 men" and was "not much more than a hamlet for the fur trade"!On the contrary,the Swedish colony of Delaware became prosperous and came to include A NUMBER OF SEVERAL FORTS built over the years,NOT ONLY "A HAMLET FOR THE FUR TRADE"!And,naturally that its garrison WAS MUCH BIGGER than onLY 24 soldiers!STOP WRITING THIS CRAP,since YOU OBVIOUSLY DON'T KNOW ALMOST ANYTHING ABOUT HISTORY AND HISTORICAL FACTS!