All Comments on 'Delaware Ch. 03'

At the end of chapter 2 I wrote <b>"suppose in chapter 3 Emma turns around? Emma having or NOT having sex with Ronny is a FALSE issue. </b>

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I predicted forced Reconcilation by this author-- and several posters hoped I was wrong... GATORHERMIT said gee I hope Harry is wrong.

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I wasnt. Then I said this author would screw up the ending. He did..

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when Emma comes back she says

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<i>She was crying now and sobbed, "Why are you doing that to me? Why are you accusing me of dirty things I never did? Why don't you trust me?" </i>

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and He says the 10000000% WRONG THING...

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the husband does NOT one time mention what he saw her do on the Bus with Ron.

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He NEVER mentions that Emma was dating RONNY a guy who is her hsubands arch enemy from a Barroom fight years ago .. and she was at the barroomn fight.

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He never mentions her sneaking around.

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He never mentions her attitiude of loathing & disrespect.

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Instead he says this...

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<i>"Because I love you and had an old fashioned idea that our son would prefer to live with his real parents. I'm sorry for causing your problems and I understand that I have to accept that we are living in new times with new customs. Obviously it is in to be an independent single parent."</i>

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told ya...

I waited three weeks to get to the end of your story and I'm glad I did. I have come to the conclusion that you should start a club for wimp British husband who always seem to have their feet frozen in place while they finger their little three inch cocks while watching some stud bang their wives. Turn around and leave to get drunk while tears stream down their face.( Brits are good at drinking) and never even think that the man deservs a good ass fucvk (Not from the wife) for their role in humiliating the Brit husband who would rather go off and have a pint and law with Buffy or Red about some long forgotten war while lkeaving their wives alone to be fucked by a big cocked stud. YOU ARE MY ONE BRIGHT SPOT IN A DULL WORLD> KEEP WRITING THEM

Everyone has choices to make in the face of temptations that Life presents to all at various times, and the wife in this story obviously believed far too deeply in the false faith of the essential goodness of men (I've seen rape crisis center statistics that indicated 60% of college boys would rape a woman if they could get away with it)... she believed that rumours of ill intentions were merely jealous imaginings of unhealthy obsessions. <p> When it came to standing up like a man, the husband stood his ground and spelled out the consequences of her choice that she would be making that night: go to the club and cheat/be raped if she wants a divorce, or stay faithful and safe at home from evil men if she chooses to remain married. Women haters will be disappointed to see a story like this in which a marriage actually survived a challenge, that a man and woman chose and fought to remain committed... then again, misogynists would be happier if the husband sought out anything for sexual release other than a woman! <p> Marriages are partnerships that require constant work to remain healthy, yet it seems that some men expect a lazy "cruise control" approach to work as they treat their women like brain-dead chattel with no opinions to be concerned about as the dumb wife will forever be chained to their whims... they seem to take an attitude that any effort required on the "Real Man's" part to uphold their marriage partnership means that the lying cheating whore is "stepping out", and is therefore deserving of a brutal death for a punishment. How curiously comical an attitude! <p> Thank you for sharing, Winterfrog!

<p>This one was not infused with any of Winterfrog's unique humor, so the story was rather dry. </p>

<p>Still, when a total moron like Harry hates it, it must have some redeeming social value.</p>

<p>Unlike that misogynistic motherfucker Harry, Winterfrog has a basic respect for women. The wife in this story thought everything going on around her was innocent. She got into a pissin' match with her husband, who had inside information that things were not as they appeared to be.</p>

<p>And yet when push came to shove she chose to NOT attend the dinner meeting for the secrect sect. Not good enough according to friend Harry. That she considered going to the meeting was grounds for divorce according to Harry.</p>

<p>What kind of marriage does Harry have, anyway? Does he beat his wife every Saturday night on general principles? Or does he really live in a single room at the YMCA, lying around at night wanking his tiny little pud and listening to Rush Limbaugh?</p>

You have done a great job in finishing this fantasy. I like the completion, but I have a problem seeing any woman as naive as the wife Emma. I just cannot get my head around anyone being that gullible, totally untrusting and disrespectful of her husband and being on the brink of just hateful towards him. What made her so distrust her husband to start with.<P>You do a great job of weaving a story. The Scandinavian lifestyle is foreign to me yet also so intriguing. Thank you for the wonderful entertainment. I do look forward to your next fantasy adventure you take us on.<P>With high regard<P>PT <P>.<P>PS some poster is giving you hell for being British. Some people can not even read a biography or see differences between England and Scandinavia.

You may be the stupidest most brain dead turd I have ever seen

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<i>When it came to standing up like a man, <b>the husband stood his ground and spelled out the consequences of her choice that she would be making that night: go to the club and cheat/be raped if she wants a divorce, or stay faithful and safe at home from evil men if she chooses to remain married.</b> Women haters will be disappointed to see a story like this in which a marriage actually survived a challenge, that a man and woman chose and fought to remain committed... then again, misogynists would be happier if the husband sought out anything for sexual release other than a woman! </i>

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<b> WHY </b>does he have to spell it out? !!?! Jesus what a Moron.

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All throughout chapter 1 and 2 he repeatedly spelled out what would be the consequences of her actions... how he objected to them.... how she was intentionally shitting on him with his worst enemy.

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YOUR offensive post seems to be premise on the wife having NO idea what she was doing was wrong.

used to like Winterfrog's story; now, they not only drag but are also too childishly told. <p>

by the way, why is it that every other word is "damn"?

I liked this chapter better than 1 and 2. Agree with Bullet that this story was a bit dry, but it is a pretty good read (especially the final chapter). Glad to see the good guys win once in a while.

...the way most stories of this type usually are. And I'm not saying that just because I'm from Sweden. Honestly, you can trust a Swede. :D

The winner of the worst spelled & spoken comments is - ta da - The Harry monster. He wins an expense laden 2 week trip to Iran's cout school with all the trappings of an excited child with a worry bone between his chops - which garbles his typing and sense.<P>

You Author - are a breath of fresh air and while not perfect neither is the Harry one despite his self proclamations of Einstein mentality.<P>

Harry - you make yourself such an easy target - it's like shooting fish in a - well you know. Why not take out the vitriol - state your mind in a non-attack mode and go on. Try it you may actually garner some respect that way.<P>

Author - you are appreciated for your efforts, theme and imaginations. You set them in your world with local mechanisms and observations which allow us to see a bit of your world.<P>

Thanks Again - you are looked forward to.<P>

With High Regard

We appreciate this author's efforts - the stories are quite entertaining and provide a unique perspective [thank you]. Only the "professional commentators" like that idiot, Alvaron53 [who can not submit any stories here because he is not paid to do so]will subjectively brag to this author how bad his story is. Once again, lets take up a collection and allow the "master storyteller" to enlighten us with his perfect work. Going to back down from the challenge again, Alvaron53?

I like your stories. I was hoping that the Moose would kick a few asses along the way.

Boyd

Well, if it ain't my personal pain slut, Anonymous, befouling the airwaves again. I'd comment on this tale but I haven't read it and, in all honesty, don't plan to. Didn't think much of the first two chapters so I see no reason to waste time reading this one. Obviously, you need someone to tell you what the story meant but I can't do that for you this time. I just know you're terribly disappointed but don't let that get you down.

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You oughta put your money where your mouth is and get on over to Ruthie's so you can check out the fine stories there. Or are you all talk and no action? On second thought, don't answer that. We know the answer already. What is certain is that you like pain and humilation so I'll continue to do my best to make sure you get all you need.

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We now return you to your regularly scheduled smut channel. If this had been a real emergency, you would've been instructed where to turn for more erotic stories.

Winterfrog has given us another tour de force on the problems that beset today's relationships and the methods necessary to extricate ourselves from those problems.He points out the dangers of trying to be too diplomatic in dealing with those who would destroy our marriages by tampering with the morals that are the foundations of good unions.If the moral supports are removed then the structure must crash.This is why he does not equivocate with his weak-willed wife.What is wrong is WRONG!The wife cannot live the life of a libertine and, still, be part of his family.Being a whore and a member of the husband's family is not a compatible idea.More to the point, Winterfrog implies that failure on the part of the husband to demand compliance from the wife would be the worst sort of dereliction of duty on his part as head of household and protector of his family.Armed with the father's strong sense of morality and his will to be a strong leader his family is well defended against the vermin that threaten its very existence.A wise man once said that no one can take the home of a strong man armed.

But not good, either. No woman is this naive. And if everything is so innocent, why wasn't she more forthcoming with her Husband? So, if it wasn't naivete, the Wife was justr hateful. Why would any man want to stay married to that?

Bullet=HarryinVa is a "misogynistic motherfucker" because he brought up great points? In at least one regard I strongly agree with him. Adultery begins far from the bedroom.

1st - to alveron53's comment about ruthies site - I didn't think hawking another site was the right thing to do here - nor do I think you speak for all or even most.<P>

So if you favor that site why are you here in any shape or form except to badmouth and shift readership?<P>

Thanks Author - please disregard the opposing self serving agenda cited by alveron53.

A good story but each story revolves around the husband preventing penis pentration of his wife or else divorce. Every husband seems to be preoccupied with his social standing with respect to whether to divorce his wife or not. There is nothing innocent about spending a weekend with an ex-boyfriend who have every reason to hate the husband. Add the fact Emma's buyer's remorse over choosing him over Ronny, Ronny's wife beating and Ronny bragging on fucking her you can only conclude that Emma did not respect Fredrick at all. Why the careful avoidance to keep Fredrick in the dark about Ronny? Unfortunately, Emma appears to be the same as the other wives in your stories.>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Emma did not turn away from the sect out of respect and love for Fredrick but because she was facing a divorce. That fear is used does not mean that Emma will stay faithful. She will be damned careful not to get caught!

I don't read many stories all the way through lately because it seems to me there is a dearth of good ones being posted, but I always read those written by Winterfrog. Why? It’s simply because he always has a tale to tell and that, all by itself, is the essence of writing. “Delaware” may be Winterfrog’s best story to date. Certainly, he is progressing as a writer. I don't guess many readers noticed how well this story has been tied to actual historical events. That requires considerable research--it's hard work and I, for one, appreciate the effort the author put into the story. The storyline in this story was nicely done, tightly constructed, and Winterfrog didn't stray from it pursuing inconsequential sidelines. My only complaint is I really prefer Winterfrog’s work without any editor getting into the act, however professional and helpful that person is. I intend no offense and I hope none is taken. I simply think Winterfrog’s occasional different and wonderful translations from his native language into English are, in themselves, part of Winterfrog’s charm. Whatever…this was a fine story, Winterfrog. I enjoyed reading it and I thank you for sharing your talents with us.

LH

I am a fan of yours and like your stories but this one I would have like to seen packaged differently. I think these three chapters could be put into one and given to us as it would make it easier to read. Thank you for your writing.

I found your story highly entertaining and congratulate you on its originality. Your stories always seem to have a certain air about them where the husbands are quite macho & straight talking who could never be accused of being wimps but are also patient and understanding to their often naive wives. Well done and thanks for sharing

like Jimmy Carter "lusting in his heart". Did she cheat? I think old PAPATOAD would have thought so and I think his reaction would have been a "scorched earth solution". The Winterfrog that I have come to respect, probably should have reacted somewhat similarly. I still respect your talent, but I'm not sure that I liked your Delaware story very much. Keep on writing.

... but rather good.

Need I say more????????????

There's a saying. "All's well that ends well." That about all I have so say about this tale.

Almost but not quite. Kudos to her husband for standing firm. Good story.

She gets an out BUT she is not nearly as sharp as she needs to be - lol

It is a pain in the ass when you are married to a stupid selfish woman who thinks she can act like she is not married. Sure she didn't fuck around on him, because he had to threaten her with divorce! What kind of marriage is that? Women may be adept liars, they may be good at covering up their cheating, but they can't think things all the way through. They are short sighted and led by their emotions.

syntax made this a difficult read. The story itself was on so-so.

Good premise for a story. However, the flow and the number of syntax errors made it hard to stay engaged. I think an experienced editor would have made for a more pleasant reading experience.

For a change it worked out when the wife understood she might lose her family.

The only thing was her not trusting her husband as much as she trusted Rolf.

the glitches from another language to English didn't take away from this tale. I liked that the husband stood his ground but I didn't like the attitude of his wife. Since she got into that society she was making disrespectful comments to him about their marriage and him being her choice over good old Ronnie. And getting together with good old Ronnie on the bus trip. That was an absolute step across the cheating line. If he hadn't of waded through her horrible attitude she would have been fucked, literally and I think out of her marriage. And then getting maniacal about going to the Mansion and spending the night. She lied to him right there about what she was planning on doing. I don't for a minute think she didn't know about all of the sex going on and obviously she was okay with it because she stayed in the group through it all. She was willful and hurtful in her responses to him and even loudly complained that they had bad problems in their marriage, but I don't remember reading about any problems other that her quest for new and exciting dicks.

Oh well, thanks for sharing your story.

Emma's punishment was weak,all She did was only punished by the threat of a divorce.He had to instigate everything to stop her cheating twice so he should have punished her more efficient tell her to live with her parents whilst he thought about the divorce,make her sweat.

This didn't have the same "macho" responses found in many of WF stories and still kept me wanting to know how he would turn the tables on the would be lothario and still be able to forgive his wife who did appear to have been looking for something special.

Accurate or not reading Winter Frog's stories seems to give an insight to his depiction of sexual attitudes in his part of Scandinavia. Will you provide us a new story after so many years of silence?

Enjoyed the stort, and the.historical information. Emma was so hard headed that she almost made a fatal mistake, and came to her senses just in time. Moose is the typical WF hero. Strong, smart, and straight up. Love him and his work.

As usual, WF is somewhat off of the beaten path, and that's a good thing. This story, however, was weird.

A relationship "with love,marriage and a child" IT'S NOT AT ALL an "average" relationship,but A VERY GOOD RELATIONSHIP!The partners from such a couple HAVE ALMOST EVERYTHING,so that COULD NEVER BE CALLED "average"!

Then,why on Earth would someone need "to be assisted" by his friends when "he was harassed by a stranger"?!If a person is harassed by a stranger,then the respective person SHOULD GO TO THE POLICE AND TO OTHER AUTHORITIES because THEY ARE THE ONES MEANT TO TAKE CARE OF THAT!There is NO NEED FOR HIM/HER to "be assisted" by his/her friends to get rid of the harraser!

IT'S NOT TRUE that the Lenni Lenape Indians "arrived in Oklahoma around 1867 after 130 years on the road"!Actually,THEY ARRIVED IN OKLAHOMA IN THE 1860s after 176 YEARS(not 130!) in which European settlers progressively pressed them to move further west!

The so-called "Pharaoh's Revenge"(in fact A TUMMY BUG which causes diarrhea!) is feared EVERYWHERE IN EGYPT,not only in "those riverboats on the Nile"!

And THERE AREN'T "white collar prisons"!This is basically just another way to describe low and medium security prisons!

Also,I REALLY DON'T UNDERSTAND why a woman regarded a man "a bit curiously" for "not making any attempts to have sex with her" when he "was married to a lovely wife"?!SHE HAD ABSOLUTELY NO REASON to regard him "curiously" at all because HE WAS ACTING ABSOLUTELY NORMAL and such a behaviour wasn't "natural"only in that town,but EVERYWHERE IN THE WORLD!

Fucking a woman "without any necking or foreplay" and "with hard thrusts" DOESN'T MEAN AT ALL a "cruel fucking"!That's BULLSHIT!A LOT OF MEN are sometimes fucking women JUST LIKE THAT,without any problem!Husbands fuck their wives EXACTLY LIKE THAT,from time to time!

I DON'T UNDERSTAND how he can say that "it's probably only Emma herself and the good Lord who knows her intentions with Ronny" after that "she even swore once again that she had never had any intentions of cheating on him"with the respective guy!If she acted like that and HE LOVED HER(as he keep saying),then HE HAD NO REASON TO DOUBT HER and HE HAD TO HAVE TRUST IN HER!If she said that she had no intentions to cheat her husband with that guy,THEN IT WAS LIKE THAT and THE HUSBAND KNEW HER INTENTIONS,too!

THERE WEREN'T ANY "rumors which say that native people in Northern Scandinavia,Laplanders,might be in some way related to North American Indians"!That's SIMPLY A NONSENSE!THERE WERE NEVER SUCH RUMOURS!Laplanders,better known as Sami people,most likely came in Scandinavia from THE URAL MOUNTAINS REGION,where they lived in ancient times!

And THERE ISN'T ANY "old church" in Delaware that was "a memory of Swedish presence as colonists in Delaware more than 350 years ago"!The only church built by the Swedish community that still exists in Delaware dates back FROM 1699,not from the time of the Swedish colony,in the 1650s!Also,IT'S NOT TRUE AT ALL that "those many missionaries sent over there from Sweden during all the years only succeeded in baptizing one Lenni Lennape Indian"!This is ANOTHER STUPIDITY!Those many missionaries SUCCEEDED IN BAPTIZING HUNDREDS of Lenni Lenape Indians!LEARN SOME HISTORY before writing SUCH HUGE NONSENSES!

Finally,I MUST DISAGREE with someone who said in a comment that "this was a strange story"!THERE IS DEFINITELY NOTHING STRANGE in this story!And also THERE AREN'T RELIABLE HISTORICAL INFORMATIONS in this story,as somebody else said that he enjoyed,but ONLY LAME AND INCOMPLETE historical informations!So,THERE IS NOTHING TO "ENJOY" FROM THEM!

He was a changed man. He was initially sent to a white-collar prison. But due to his arrogance, the authorities sent him to a medium-security prison due to the death threats. 9 months later he was sent to a high-security prison after his 4th beating. Again due to his arrogance.

Due to a high number of prisoners, he shared a cell with Eric Larkson, a friend of mine from school. His nickname was Bubba due to his innocent-looking babyface. He was sentenced to life for killing his wife and her 3 gangbang partners.

When he found out what Rolf did to several friends, of his from school, Bubba made Rolf's life a living hell.

Interestingly, a reporter from Delaware came to our humble little town, chasing a story about the death of an unnamed Native American on the streets of Dover, the capital of Delaware. Apparently he had been overheard in a bar bragging about how easy the women of our town were and that he had fucked dozens. Several of the men from our town were in Dover on business and were in the bar that night. 2 had divorced their wives over the damned sex sect.

The Police report eventually put his death down to misadventure. The reporter left our town with an interesting story which she later turned into a best selling novel. She eventually bought Rolf's old house and turned 3/4's into a museum of cheaters. She lives in the other 1/4 writing her next novel.

This is one strange and humorous story, this is what winterfrog is really good at. Where did he go?

My only interest in Delaware is its' sea food, of which it excels. LP