All Comments on 'Deliverance Ch. 02'

This story is very interesting and promising, won't you please continue it? It is important to remember that most likely there will not be many readers at first due to the impression of this being an unfinished story, which alienates readers (so do not expect many reviews, at least for the next several chapters, but hopefully you are better than those who write for reviews), but if you do update with a more regular schedule and bring this story to a satisfying conclusion, I can foresee it becoming one of the beloved stories on this site, because it has all that in the making :). Please please write more!