All Comments on 'Delivery Van'

by goatsogmay2

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Could you have made this woman any more stupid?

Time to tell her husband, get her divorce, and become a full time whore. She is a real worthless piece of trash. She and her husband both need to go thru complete STD and HIV testing for at least a year. You have really described a woman who thinks only with her "cunt" and has an IQ below 70. She is exactly what Amir and the others called her!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
not believeable

some of u authors really make women look stupid, none of this story is reality. u must not be able to get a woman with your opinion this low. dont quit u dayjob

Alvaron53Alvaron53almost 17 years ago
Not enjoyable

I must've been asleep when they redefined rape as adultery. Badly written fiction with nonsensical characters in unrealistic situations. I suppose there was a plot here but the wife was so stupid that the storyline made no sense.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Excellent!

Very well written and highly arousing. Good idea with the belly-dancing outfit.

Please keep writing stuff like this.

You just have to ignore the few literalist who simply never understand that this is a site for erotica. The idiots who always wonder if everything is real. No understanding of the word 'fantasy".

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
excellent

this story was so hot..i would love to read more of your stories in the future.

i wouldnt pay any mind to those idiot comments, they're just jealous.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Hope the fucking cheating whore at least got knocked by that arab bastard and her husband divorces her or better yet she get AIDS from the arab bastard and dies a slow, painful lonely death for being the lying cheating cunt she is

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
awsome

It was a good story, I enjoyed the way it started and especialy how it ended , So very possibe to get into a situation that turns out that way and can't really do anything about it, but go with it. A 5 star keep going with your writting

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