All Comments on 'Delta City: Rise of Chameleon'

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awesomee

great story, please continue!

It's 2016 already and half the stories I read on this site don't even come close to captivating me to read as your's Miles so I suggest if you have the time to continue this if possible.

Great story. Hope to see it continued!

Loved this! Really hot and you handled the genre very well.

The only spelling error that stood out for me was at the bottom of page two, knell

That was amazing, please do more!

Just wanted you to know Miles. You are an incredible story writer as always. You managed to lay down great ground work to build from and you have an awesome origin story as well. It is a very well thought out story. As always thank you for sharing with us. You're awesome.

Definitely do more please!

Hey guys, if you spot any silly spelling errors please let me know (nicely please, lol) so I can learn and get better. Unfortunately I have dyspraxia and when I was 10 I was completely illiterate. So I have had to teach myself to write and be a writer as I failed to pick up on a lot of things in School. So I am using this site as practice to improve my craft so I can go forward as a writer, using one of the fine hard working editors on this site won't help me to improve. So please be kind pointing out errors. Thanks guys and I hope you continune to enjoy my stories :-)