All Comments on 'DeLuca's Pleasure Pt. 01'

by FHH69

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Danno_61455Danno_61455over 8 years ago
SMOOTHLY CHOREOGRAPHED PIECE OF WORK

I have really enjoyed reading this story. It was straight forward and told it complete!

DeanofMeanDeanofMeanabout 1 year ago

um is there going to be a protagonist? Well written good dialog but so far your characters all seem to be very broken toys

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