All Comments on 'Demon Child Ch. 04'

I can actually see the pictures in my mind's eye as I read your story.

I'm really enjoying this stream. The story moves smoothly, the descriptions are vivid & the storyline is interesting!!

Waiting anxiously for more!!

I am thoroughly enjoying your well written story, infact I get quite engrossed whilst reading it, with your characters and descriptions you can actually visualise the landscape as it goes along.

Looking forward already to the next instalment, wishing you continued success with your writing!

I luv this world you have created and how inventive you are with words. Keep writing!!!

I love the games that the young warriors did. That one warrior worries me a bit. You know I thought these warriors were a race of demons. Guess I was wrong lol. But I can't wait to see what happens next.

I'm loving this series, more soon please!

so YOU are making this whole thing up from scratch? the culture- the language- and everything?

WOW!

I love it and I am hooked!

I can't wait to see more of the adventures of the Twisted Dagger!

What a life for that chic!

I mean if you gotta be the lowest "someone" on the totempole? Well- that one would be having a few O'ptions

ya know/ I think I could live with that --

to be having a whole regiment of men be in love with me.

Yup- That'd be great.

a whole new idea of showing your troop support!

LOL! Of course, I would have to be assigned with my Marines somewhere - because Once you have the Best= you can't just settle for the Rest.

Semper Fi ya'll

Marinetown, USA

yutt yutt

I don't have a log in yet, but I've read quite a few stories here, and I must say, this seems to be one of the best written, and your doing an awesome job with it so far. I only wish there was more of it to read already.

I didn't think you would top your Finding Home series. I was wrong. I'm hooked and eagerly looking forward to the next installment.

I never feel really happy for her because of the ending that your revealed at the beginning. I keep waiting for the point where she would get dumped and no longer needed, so she can turn into that bitter old lady. I think this is wonderful but maybe it would be more satisfying if you did not give the ending away :(

I am really enjoying this series, thanks for sharing. :))