All Comments on 'Demonic Partnership Ch. 10'

great chapter cant wait for more

As I'm sure you've heard before, the grammar and such needs a little work, but in pure creativity and ingeniousness, this is a 4.5 out of 5.

Thanks and thanks to everyone who had taken the time out to read this series so far. I have heard it before about my grammar, I'm not into using colons so I will stick with the grammar I am using though your comments are appricated.

as has been mentioned you have wonderful creativity and excellent technical skills for a 4/5. What I found lacking was emotional content and that cost the cone point. In spite of that I read it through to this point as I found the content fascinating - thanks for your time/efforts.

DM