All Comments on 'Demon's Grace Ch. 05-06'

I actually completely love your story and I like how not everything is explained so that you are continuously eager for more and a reader can use their imagination - well done!

All this wordplay between the demons and Dove is very frustrating as no one really commits to anything. Is Ezra in love with Dove? And why is she bonding with Taurin despite vehemently saying no earlier on? If you want me as a reader to go on with the reading you have to come up with more reasonable things and facts. For instance how powerful is Ezra? Dove treats him as an idiot and you as the author are not better making your characters looking like stupid beings and that very highly includes the hunter. She is the most daft of them in my opinion. Sad because the thought of having demons work together with humans is quite intriguing.

Thank you for reading my chapters everyone :) I know I can get a little convoluted as I try to keep the action going while delving into background of everyone and everything else going on. This story is actually done and I am writing the second in the series currently. I do appreciate all the comments and Dove does grow up. Her dislike of her natural abilities has caused her to stall in her own personal evolution.